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Adopts!

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This is my furst set of adopts
The Ice dog and Bunny Butterfly egg are free!
The Egg will hatch to reveal the bunny after its taken
Dark wolf will be fur 1 point :33
Ice wolf owned by
:iconjoandavaproductions:
Name: Kilani
Age: 12 Human years
Gender: Female
:33< Purrsonality: She's a cute little ice dog, she's very nice too.
UPDATE :iconpervytereziplz: DARKIE WOLFIE IS FWEE
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:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ummm.... okay, where to start here?

First off, the art looks lazy, and barely any detail was put into it at all. At least put some effort into what your advertising.
The first one looks like something that just crawled out of Hell, the second looks like a type of mermaid/ cat hybrid, and I can't even make out what that third one is. If it's supposed to be an egg, well you did a pretty bad job on it.
What I would do is flesh out the adoptables more, and give them black outlines to know what's what, to give them more of a defining angle.
I really hope you do better when it comes to adoptables.